(前幾個禮拜藝術老師對我作品的COMMENT ~ 出乎我意料之外的評論)
有時候只是想藉由某些事說一些故事而已，太高深的技術、太艱難的文字好像都不很重要
只怕有idea、有素材，卻無法自成一套理論 ，但其實還有很多很多想和很強很強的同學&Randall分享
Video Double:
With all the technical issues you were having I thought you did an excellent job putting this video together. It was not clear to me if the video past the mirror section was intended, so that would be my main criticism: to only include what belongs to the project, or to better contextualize how the outdoor shot and the window relate. Otherwise I am intrigued by the mirror and its relation to the restricted ego, portraying the complexity of ego and personality. Would it have made sense to have included your own image in the video? I am wondering why you did not include yourself, other than your hand placing the camera. I think this is the beginning of a very interested idea, which you may want to continue this semester, as the work we are doing in this class is about bridging your own discipline with networked practice. Points: 4/5
Open Source post:
Excellent, you articulated the notion that open source is an alternative mode of production that involves more people, or I would say is more inclusive. 2/2
Robert Whitman, The American Moon Critique
Frank, I am really delighted to see the quality of thinking here. Foremost, you have grasped the idea that Whitman’s work is the construction of a virtual world, and that he has place performers into this world to engage the relationship between the human and the media. Also, I was particularly struck by how you saw Whitman’s pressed body as an act of being enslaved within the media. Brilliant! On a technical level, you are doing an excellent job integrating media and words within the post. I know that English is not your first language, but I am enjoying how you use the language, often in very poetic ways. 10/10
The Collective Body
Great work! It seems your alter ego is a rock star who seems to be flying around the stage, liberated from the stage, flying high above the audience. Very inspiring! 5/5
Summary
I am so impressed with the work you are doing and I am really enjoying your creative spirit in class!
這可能就是我心中理想的自由、想要的天空，但願美好不要那麼快結束就好!
